I absolutely loved this, the format, the wording, how so little needed to be said for three elaborate stories to be told all at once. You've inspired me to get a whole lot more creative!
But it is a valid point - I tend to not let a piece or story stay a sentence longer than it needs to (I’m the same way when I make music, 97% is just 8 bars repeating themselves - just the core idea).
It can be powerful, but this just makes me want to publish a 15min read post in the future!
We all should try flopping every now and then, right? 😅
I loved how timing and serendipity were woven through this piece.
Thank you 🙏🏻
I absolutely loved this, the format, the wording, how so little needed to be said for three elaborate stories to be told all at once. You've inspired me to get a whole lot more creative!
I legitimately jumped a little when I read this comment - Thank you 🙏🏻
And you’ve actually inspired me to keep going with the fiction (it wasn't planned at all, I just couldn't help myself)
When you can't help yourself, you know you're onto something good. I'm looking forward to that fiction of yours :)
Love how concise and detailed at relevant points it is.
Thank you! 🙏🏻
Nicely done, I wanted more, but I guess that is the aim of a skilfully written story after all! Thanks for sharing :)
Thank you! 🙏🏻 That is the aim, for sure!
But it is a valid point - I tend to not let a piece or story stay a sentence longer than it needs to (I’m the same way when I make music, 97% is just 8 bars repeating themselves - just the core idea).
It can be powerful, but this just makes me want to publish a 15min read post in the future!
We all should try flopping every now and then, right? 😅
I say, always leave ppl wanting more!