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Zossima's StoryStack's avatar

Well, that was nerve-wracking. I like the ambiguity of the ending, left me wondering what happens in the next minute

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Joakim Blytt's avatar

Fascinating to hear you say that, my wife said the exact same thing - but my response was -

“Huh? What next minute?”

My fiction tend to be braindumped and then left - just like my other work.

It gets to live on its own, warts and all.

But maybe it doesn’t have to be that way?

My point is - that comment actually meant a great deal to me 🙏🏻

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Wandering Armenian's avatar

Pretty intensive and fascinating …loved it

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Joakim Blytt's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻

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Untold Stories from the Void's avatar

I was so nervous they was gonna do it. Sooooo nervous.

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Joakim Blytt's avatar

I know, right? So glad you liked it 🙏

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Untold Stories from the Void's avatar

I loved it

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